Sta.sh
Stand in the warm glow
That rains so lightly upon
The cold, glittering snow
Before that star is gone
Shelter from the cold night
Until the brilliant dawn
The return of the soothing light
Of which we've grown so fond
Too often, the more distant stars
Go, in our ignorance, forgotten
They're away from us, so very far
But from them, are our lives begotten
The Music of the Spheres
Is audible to attentive ears
Listen to that magnificent symphony
That of the vast, dark eternity
Burning Orb of Luminescent Glory
Eclipse the whole of the human story
Lashing out with tongues of fire
Trivialize all human passion and desire
Stars are within us
As we are but a small part
Of the Forever All;
The Wonderful Universe
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The arrangement of the rhyme was very standard and very smooth. As a general poem it is adequate, as a philosophical or spiritual poem it has better standing. The universe reference at the close was what induced me. The content was breathtaking. I loved that the remote stars go forgotten, and that they lie within us.